tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post7235137507830037771..comments2020-11-20T22:24:11.193-06:00Comments on Stephanie's Myth-Folklore Blog: Week 1 Story: The Belly and the MembersStephhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04597493234124640669noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-63864316855415988882016-08-28T16:06:26.810-05:002016-08-28T16:06:26.810-05:00I also like how you updated the setting of the tal...I also like how you updated the setting of the tale to an office setting, making it more plausible and less abstract than having various body parts. It was good that you told us which fable it was, though. I didn't recognize it! I like that you chose a lesser-known fable.<br /><br />It was also interesting that you started off the tale in present tense. It was fun that you chose to do something slightly stylistically different than the normal.Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09921017981915411704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-3144987289952604782016-08-26T15:46:11.443-05:002016-08-26T15:46:11.443-05:00You did a good job preserving the writing style ty...You did a good job preserving the writing style typical of fables like those of Aesop. I liked that you rewrote the story to be in a modern-day setting, because it makes it more relateable. <br /><br />For notes, the story could have been improved by giving the quiet employee a name. Names make characters more lifelike and give the reader something to grasp onto. Overall I enjoyed your story and thought you did a good job!Joe Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14536130938921445367noreply@blogger.com