tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post6263566829041540988..comments2020-11-20T22:24:11.193-06:00Comments on Stephanie's Myth-Folklore Blog: Story: Disguise for LoveStephhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04597493234124640669noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-14564407394216857402016-11-28T03:02:04.416-06:002016-11-28T03:02:04.416-06:00I thought this story was really well done. I haven...I thought this story was really well done. I haven't read the original story, but I can imagine that the level of detail in the story above is all due to your creativity, so good job! The only thing I will say, is maybe breaking up the longer paragraphs in the middle with some dialogue. I found myself having to re-read certain parts.<br /><br />BUT, other than that, I really do think this is really well done on your part. Great job!Kimberley Bishophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12651897269266418713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-8414458154963644212016-11-27T23:18:04.193-06:002016-11-27T23:18:04.193-06:00Hi Stephanie, I haven’t read the original story be...Hi Stephanie, I haven’t read the original story before but after reading your story I really want to read it and be able to see well the differences between both. I have to admit that I really enjoyed reading your story as it was mysterious and I like that. I also appreciated the relationship between the father and the son as I believe in strong relationships between a father and his son. Thanks for sharing!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590600858822559323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-44474136070117525182016-11-27T23:17:05.088-06:002016-11-27T23:17:05.088-06:00Stephanie, I enjoyed this story quite a lot. It ke...Stephanie, I enjoyed this story quite a lot. It kept me on my toes. At first, I was nervous that the new king was not going to be able to wed his beloved. <br /><br />The only suggestion I would make is to add variety to your sentences in an effort to make the story flow better. The simple sentences sometimes ended up confusing me. Overall, great job. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future.Amanda Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08485878812256184552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-33233922119384852812016-11-27T22:58:21.769-06:002016-11-27T22:58:21.769-06:00This is one Brothers Grimm story I’d never even he...This is one Brothers Grimm story I’d never even heard of, so it was really interesting to read your story and then see the changes you mentioned making in the author’s note. I especially like how you took special care developing the relationship between the father and son, showing their time together in detail, so it makes sense that the son would try to do anything for his father—even sacrifice his relationship with his beloved. It makes him a lot more likeable and understandable, I think, and more complex too. Nicely done!Jenna Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10806982600269338233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-43036483853485969792016-11-27T22:33:25.640-06:002016-11-27T22:33:25.640-06:00Hey stephanie! I liked that you did this story fro...Hey stephanie! I liked that you did this story from your point of view. I also like that you did it on a fairy tail because I think those are fabulous. <br />This was a great twist. Thank you so much for your amazing writing! I can't wait to see what else you come up with throughout the rest of the semester!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09677054121399616360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-55593261224383482772016-11-27T21:29:07.125-06:002016-11-27T21:29:07.125-06:00I got a little lost in the middle area and had to ...I got a little lost in the middle area and had to re-read quite a few parts, that’s no fault of your own. I’m just tired from work. Anyways, I do like your story and it makes me want to read the original to see the differences in the story myself. It’s an entertaining and fast read. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13917021698424421749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-26063033459073866442016-11-27T09:35:02.022-06:002016-11-27T09:35:02.022-06:00I really enjoyed reading your story and think you ...I really enjoyed reading your story and think you do a great job telling your point of view. <br />I am a big fan of Sleeping Beauty and this story definitely reminded me of that fairy tale as well. I am so happy lithe prince married his beloved but I also am sad that he forgot her in the first place! Really great story, thank you for sharing! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16841316209174032600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5528776962306554012.post-53859498778583910742016-11-24T11:37:37.846-06:002016-11-24T11:37:37.846-06:00Hey Stephanie,
I hadnt read or even heard of this...Hey Stephanie,<br /><br />I hadnt read or even heard of this story before I read your post, but I really enjoyed learning more about it. I thought it was a super cute story and I liked how you added more interaction between the king and his beloved while she was in disguise. It really showed that she was desperate to do anything to get him to notice her. Keep up the good work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12946765806143909284noreply@blogger.com